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my Dream or our Future by myNimka my Dream or our Future by myNimka
This is the pic for Wacom Dreams Contest


so something about my dream ^0,0^

In the future I want to do something conected with art.
I would like art to be natural and realistic,
which I think can be possible with the use of advanced technology (like wacom^^).
I want everybody to believe in art and promote it too.

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pleas fav my picture between
December 16 and December 22
it's important

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I made the pic with Photoshop and my tablet

:heart: Hope you like it :heart:
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01309 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:wave: Greetings!

The idea for the image is good, showing a tablet pen giving 'life/creation'.

The large space around the tablet pen and the girl feel a bit too empty and makes the image overly large. Try to cut down a bit on the image size to sort of scale around the main focus on your image, otherwise everyone's eyes are going to wander around the image.

Now the girl's anatomy isn't prefect and, really, everyone is always trying to improve their anatomy when they draw. Here are some anatomy tutorials to take a peek at - [link] / [link] . Take a peek around DA for more, there are hundreds of them!

It seems you have a pretty good grasp on shading, but don't be scared to get messy with shading or going really dark for shadows and bright as white for high lights. Experiment with shading by drawing a circle, choosing a light source, and then shade away! Another tutorial for you to check out - [link] .

Keep on practicing :thumbsup:!
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myNimka Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2010
thank you for advices :hug:
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black-spiral Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2010
The picture is very interesting. It looks futuristic and quite close to nature. I love the idea of having a tablet pen creating the character, it is a very unique idea.

The lineart looks quite nice and the colours chosen suit the picture well. I would suggest adding more depth to the background in some places so it looks as though the pen has transformed it as it has transformed the girl.

There is a lot of blank space in the picture surrounding the girl and it tends to cause the eye to draw away from the girl. Try possibly minimizing the background in the future or putting a lot more detail into the background.

The girl's anatomy isn't spot on. Her head is too big for her body and then her arms and hands are too small for her body. Anatomy is something everyone has trouble with, so just practice practice practice. :)

Great effort on the picture! The composition is beautiful. :heart:
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myNimka Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2010
thank you so much for this critique :hug: I'll try keep
your advices and do somethink with my defects xD
:glomp::dalove::glomp:

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sorry for my english ^^'
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Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2009
Lovely colors!! I like the idea too! :love:
Good luck in the contest!!:heart:
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myNimka Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2009
thank you :hug: :heart:

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check my work to wacom contest [link] :gallery:
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sorry for my english ^^'
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Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2009
you're welcome:huggle::heart:
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Estheryu Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009
love it~!:+fav:
Good luck to you with the contest!!!!!:excited:
:love::love::love::love::love::love::love::love:
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myNimka Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009
thank you :love: :hug:

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check my work to wacom contest [link] :gallery:
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sorry for my english ^^'
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MiKami06 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2009
this is very beautiful :heart:
good luck in the contest :D
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